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05 April 2009 @ 04:11 am
SuJu fanfic: In the End c01  
Ok, yes, I know, I fail so hard for starting another fic when my other chaptered fic is still not done. It's just that once I thought of gang!Suju & badass!Kibum, the idea was way too hot & tempting to pass up. *o* Soooo, here, have a fic!

Title: In the End
Pairing: Kibum/Donghae aka KiHae
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~2160
Chapter: I
Summary: Kibum is the cool and charismatic second-in-command of the most powerful gang in Seoul. Donghae is a bright and bubbly new transfer student. The two are worlds apart, but when Donghae (literally) runs into Kibum one day, the younger boy's life will be turned upside down. The frustrating thing is, Donghae's not in the least bit sorry about it at all!
Notes: Let's pretend for a second that Ki & Hae are roughly the same age, ok?
Next: Chapter II | Chapter III

It was a little past seven when Kibum stepped out of the house and headed for school. A bag slinging over his shoulder casually, he pointedly ignored the stares he received from everyone around him as he mentally went over all the things he was supposed to check on today, making sure the boss wouldn't have any excuse to complain or bother him later on. He got somewhere to 'Get Sungmin to help him buy another pink shirt for the one he ruined when the boss forced him to do laundry and he might've or might've not ruined the shirt on purpose in the heat' when he distantly heard a shout. Snapping out of his trance, Kibum looked back to see something vaguely coming at him.


It was the last thing Kibum could make out before he was flung backward and onto the ground. Blinking hazily, he looked in front of him to see a guy also on the ground, a bike toppled over next to him. Kibum frowned mentally as he put two and two together and realized that he had just been run over by a bike.

The guy who apparently ran him over was muttering some sort of incoherent, "Owowowowow…" before snapping his head up and looked at Kibum. Not a second afterward, Kibum was pushed back slightly as the boy invaded his personal space, (how dare he - did he not know who Kibum was?) grabbing his shoulder and a stream of jumbled words flooded from his mouth. "Oh gosh I'm sorry I'm so sorry it's just that this bike was new and I just bought it yesterday so today when I take it out to ride it for the first time the brake suddenly decided not to work and I knew I shouldn't have taken this bike when the owner told me it's on clearance but nooooooo I wanted to save money and then you were right there and you wouldn't hear a word I say and the brake still decided not to work so then it was like CRASH and-"

Kibum felt dizzy as he listened on to the horribly run-on sentence, the words too close to his ears, and he distractedly put a hand in front of himself, hoping vaguely that the boy would get the hint and stopped talking.

Apparently the boy did get some sort of hint. He paused for a second before continuing again, this time with a different topic. "Oh yeah! Sorry I kinda forgot to ask if you're hurt anywhere." He looked frantically at Kibum before screaming, making Kibum wince at the noise. "Oh shooooooooot your jeans are torn!! I'm sorry, are you bleeding? Are you hurt? Crap that jean looks awfully expensive, but I only have about 9,000 won right now urrrrrrrm…"

"You." Kibum finally snapped, starting to get a headache from the constant rambling of the boy, "I'm fine. You don't have to pay for the jeans. Now get off me before I start to do something you'll regret later on." The other boy blinked once blankly before lifting himself off of Kibum's lap and standing up, offering his victim a sheepish smile as he rubbed his head awkwardly.

Kibum heaved a big sigh before standing up and brushed some dust off his legs distractedly before turning away and started walking. His jeans were torn but he didn't really care - he was planning to cut a few holes in it later on anyway.

"Wait!" Kibum stopped as he heard the shout and looked back, "I'm really sorry about what happened! I promise I'll pay you back somehow, ok?"

Kibum regarded the other boy for a second more before continuing his walk, choosing to dismiss the entire incident from his memory.


Donghae still stood there in some sort of daze for a full five minutes before snapping out of it and went to straighten up his bike. It was only then that he noticed that there was a huge crowd gathering near the vicinity he was at and was staring intently at him, whispers sounding through the air. He blinked confusedly - so he accidentally hit someone on his bike, but it wasn't like there was anyone seriously hurt or anything, not to mention bike accidents aren't that rare around Seoul, so why was there still a crowd long after everything happened?

Never the type to do internal briefing, Donghae grabbed a student walking nearby and asked exactly just that. The other boy just looked at him like he was on crack or something before gasping, and then proceeded to shake his head, defeated. "You're new here, aren't you?" To that he nodded. "It's not that it was a bike accident that has everyone staring and talking - it's who you ran over that's causing such an uproar right now."

"Who I ran over?" Donghae blinked blankly.

"The guy you hit was Kim Kibum, second-in-command of the most powerful gang in this whole entire area - heck, in all of Seoul. Good luck with that." The student offered him a sympathy look in his eyes before walking away.

Donghae stood there in a daze for the second time that day before he hit himself upside the head. What a great way to start out my first day here, he thought amusedly before getting on his bike again, totally forgetting the slight brake problem before another shout was heard ringing through the air and everyone scampered to get out of the way (again).


Kibum disregarded all the bows he received as he walked through the door and was greeted by the lone person sitting on a couch at the center of the room.

"Kibum, dear, you've finally arrived."

"Heechul-hyung, I told you to stop calling me 'dear'." Kibum replied automatically and sat himself down onto a sofa nearby.

"Oh pish-posh, I like calling you 'dear' so that's what you're stuck with." Heechul smirked before taking in Kibum's appearance. "What happened to you? Were you in a fight? I doubt anyone could've done that do you unless you let your guard down."

"No." Kibum scowled inwardly; did he really look that beat up? "Got ran over by a bike on the way here. Do I look that bad?"

"You look a bit battered and your hair looks like a crow's nest."

"I'm sure it's nowhere near as bad as your hair, hyung."

"Hey, mine is on purpose! It's fashionable to look this way. You just don't know how to work the look."

Chuckling to himself, Kibum replied, "Sure, sure." Looking around, he noticed that there was a figure missing. "What happened to your new lackey boy?"

At this, the other boy made a face, almost pouting. "In the library."

"Disturbing peace?"

"I wish! He's in there studying for god's sake! What does he think he's doing? He's in a gang now - gang members don't go to the library to study like good little boys!" Heechul exclaimed, making exaggerated gestures with his hand.

"Well, actually, he is a good little boy. He wouldn't've joined the gang if it weren't for the fact that he caught your interest so you forced him to join."

"I did not force him to join, Kibum-ah. He was just simply enthralled by my beauty and chose to join himself." Heechul smirked confidently.

Kibum had to admit this was somewhat half-true, so he didn't say anything to refute it. He started to rest his head in his hand, head tilted sideway, amused. "Still, though, I must say I'm somewhat surprised. You haven't been this interested in anyone since S-"

"Don't you dare say that bastard's name, Kim Kibum." Heechul growled, mood different instantly.

"Right, right, sorry." Suddenly Kibum's expression darkened as he continued speaking, "We have to do something about that person, though. I hear he's making quite a name for himself. Started a gang not too long ago and already it's quite big. I heard it's mostly made up of people who oppose us." He said, frowning.

"Fucking bastard." Hissing, Heechul brought his hand up to smooth his hair out - something Kibum knew he did when he was trying to calm down. "Still, let's watch and see what he's up to first, though. Eeteuk's already keeping an eye out for them. If that bastard dares do to anything, I'll maim him myself."

"Eeteuk?" Kibum repeated, surprise in his voice. "But he's so… nice." In fact, the only reason why someone as nice and kind as Eeteuk -who's been dubbed as 'Angel Teuk'- joined a gang was because he was best friend with Heechul and chose to join in.

"It's because he's nice that it'll be easier for him to spy on them, being all supposedly unsuspecting and all." Heechul smirked slightly. "And really, he has a dark side to him, too. Most people just don't often see it, or get to live after seeing it." He chuckled to himself.

Kibum looked at Heechul warily. Eeteuk, dark side? Doubt it, but Heechul never lied to him before, so it must be true. Although the thought sounded somewhat… absurd.

"If you say so. But if you already have everything taken care of, I'll be off then. Class is going to start in five minutes."

"What, going to classes for once?" The other boy scoffed.

Kibum just smirked back. "Well, even if I don't need to attend any classes to get an A there, I'll still need to have enough attendance to get the grade, you know. You should go to class once in awhile too, hyung." With that, he waved at Heechul before exiting the room.

The last thing Kibum heard was Heechul muttering something along the lines of, "If I can drag that stupid Hankyung out of the library, I might."


Donghae stood there smiling brightly as the teacher introduced him to the class. "Alright, Donghae, you may sit in that empty spot at the back corner over there, next to Kibum."

Donghae promptly snapped his head to the direction the teacher was pointing at and saw the same guy he ran over this morning. Kibum was sitting sideways, back resting on the desk handle, head tilted to the left onto the headrest, while his feet draped casually on the surface of the empty seat beside him. The empty seat that -Donghae realized with a start- will be his seat from now on.

The teacher urged him on, looking a bit nervous. He supposed the teacher didn't want to assign Donghae to that seat, either, but that was the only open spot left in the room (And it must be open for a reason, he thought distractedly), so he started to walk towards the back of the room, the other students staring at him with a mix of sympathy and horror.

He came to a halt near his spot when Kibum's legs were in the way blocking the path and he needed to get past it to get to his seat - not to mention that he'd need them out of the way if he had any hope of putting any textbooks on the desk to get any learning done. Taking a big breath, Donghae smiled brightly at the boy before blurting out, "Kibummie, can you take your feet off so I can get to my desk?"

Silence and distressed looks were directed at him instantly. Weird, did he say something wrong?

Kibum started to tilt his head the other way and rest it on the palm of his right hand instead. "What did you just say?" He asked, calmly.

"Urr, can you take your feet-"

"No, before that."

"…Kibummie?" Donghae replied, eye blinking wide and innocent.

"Hmn." Kibum looked at the other boy for the first time, really looked at him, before a smile slowly appeared lazily on his face. "It's been awhile since someone has called me that. You're quite interesting, Donghae." He enunciated the boy's name clearly before lifting his feet up and off the desk, eyes holding Donghae's gaze the entire time.

Donghae smiled cheekily before plopping down in his seat, not even noticing the shocked look on everyone else's -including the teacher's- face. A light bulb suddenly lit up on top of his head, so he hastily took out his brand-new notebook and started to scribble furiously.

Three things about Seoul that I've came to realize today:

1. Apparently it's being controlled by a gang

2. Said gang's second-in-command is really hot. Also has a killer smile - Talk about a double scoop! I think I might just be in love.

3. I think I like this place. A lot. I can't wait to see how all of this will turn out.

And with that, he grinned to himself as he looked up and started to listen to the teacher's lecture about Trigonometric Identities, ready to start his day at Soo-Man University for the first time.

Yes I totally named the school after the big man himself - if it weren't for him, there would be no DBSK or SuJu, so gotta honor the man somehow, yes? XD

This is my first SuJu fic ever. Hope I didn't butcher the characterization too badly orz. I hope to include everyone in here as the story goes (if it does), so look forward to that. Four has already made appearance and four more got mentioned. Bonus cookies if you can figure out who those eight are. /o/

Anyway, how was the story? Tell me if I should even continue it, or if I failed horribly and should be banned from writing SuJu fics ever again lol. Thanks for reading~
mood: enthralledenthralled
music: DBSK - Don't Say Goodbye
leunah23leunah23 on April 5th, 2009 10:21 pm (UTC)
im really interested..pls write more!!! YAY FOR KIHAE!!! XDDDD
where we ends: Donghaedecolorize on April 6th, 2009 12:59 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading~ /spazzes at your icon. The two sure are close in that pic, neh? ;D If only they move a bit more closer to each other I'd die *__*
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the other yuri: kihaesallysync on April 5th, 2009 11:12 pm (UTC)
I am really interested!
YIIII!!! I'm so happy. :D
where we ends: Donghaedecolorize on April 6th, 2009 01:00 am (UTC)
Whee thanks for reading~

P.S.: I love your fics as well. We gotta spread the KiHae love all around, y/y? <3333
ja_ka_saja_ka_sa on April 5th, 2009 11:35 pm (UTC)
"Kibummie, can you take your feet off so I can get to my desk?"</strong>

EEek I couldn't stop giggling-squealing at that line, I had to read it serveral time to soak it in lol

Please carry on writing, lemme know when you've wrote the 2nd chapter please ^_~
where we ends: Donghaedecolorize on April 6th, 2009 01:02 am (UTC)
I just love how oblivious Donghae can be sometimes. <333 That's when he's at his cutest, me thinks. :3

Thanks for reading~ I'll be sure to crosspost once I finished c02. :D
todefinebeauty on April 5th, 2009 11:40 pm (UTC)
Haha, this is so cute ♥ I love each of their encounters - Donghae's flippant reactions ("Second in command of a gang? Oh. 'Kay. *rides away*" and "He'll be sitting next to me? His feet are on my desk? No problem... hm, he's hot :D") are fantastic. I'm interested to see what happens next :)
where we ends: Donghaedecolorize on April 6th, 2009 01:04 am (UTC)
How is it that the way you summarize everything is more awesome than the actual story itself? XD I seriously lol'd hard at the way you portrayed the scenes. It seems that I like writing slightly oblivious!Donghae. He's just too cute to resist that way. <3333

Thanks for reading~
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where we ends: Donghaedecolorize on April 6th, 2009 01:06 am (UTC)
Ahaha thank you for liking this story! I'll be honored if you decided to pimp this out. <3333

And Donghae is ALWAYs cute 24/7 to me, especially when he's together with Kibum. ♥ /spazzes
penipenpenpenipenpen on April 6th, 2009 12:18 am (UTC)
continue this!! it's awesome!
Reading this early in the morning makes me grin oh-so-wide. :D
where we ends: Donghaedecolorize on April 6th, 2009 01:07 am (UTC)
Everyone needs a daily dose of KiHae every morning, y/y? ;D

Thanks for reading~
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Allyysikmeowmeow on April 6th, 2009 01:38 am (UTC)
It's interesting. Please continue it. ^_^
where we ends: Homin <33decolorize on April 6th, 2009 03:08 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading~

Btw, may I ask where your icon comes from? /lol'd at Sungmin. What the heck is he doing? XD;;
× jade: sakurada dori // blacksapphiresnow on April 6th, 2009 02:18 am (UTC)
Ooo~~ Suju gangfic? With added KiHae bonus? More please <33 XD
where we ends: Yunhodecolorize on April 6th, 2009 03:11 am (UTC)
kskdfsk My first time writing AU, not to mention gang!AU lol. I really hope I don't fail. Thanks for reading~

P.S.: Of course it's KiHae if I'm going to write anything SuJu. Because that pairing is just that.much.love. ♥ /spazzes
THE shadowtailmon: rawrshadowtailmon on April 6th, 2009 02:38 am (UTC)
OMG!! This is your first fic? It's sooo good!!! X3
I love it! I love it! I love it!!!
I hope there's more~
where we ends: Homin <33decolorize on April 6th, 2009 03:15 am (UTC)
I'm glad I didn't fail at my 1st attempt at SuJu, then. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading~ :D
imsweet_11imsweet_11 on April 6th, 2009 02:39 am (UTC)
aww...this is good..
cant wait to see more kihae^^
and can i make a request for hanhyuk couple?
i adore that couple..well, heechul is in love with shiwon rite?
*puppy eye*
where we ends: Yunhodecolorize on April 6th, 2009 03:20 am (UTC)
Lolol I threw that in on a whim to get started on some sort of vague plot for this story. Everyone'll be expanded more later. I'm not sure if I'll even include any other pairing except for KiHae definitely in this story, but I'll do my best to make it enjoyable for you, ok? :D

But Hangyuk... interesting. I have to admit I haven't seen too many of that pairing before (probably cuz I'm really new to the fandom). I'm not really sure how their dynamics would work? :O /goes off to try some Hanhyuk fics
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lilaznjewellilaznjewel on April 6th, 2009 03:04 am (UTC)
its interesting i cant wait for more!
where we ends: Donghaedecolorize on April 6th, 2009 03:20 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading~ :D
bum_min on April 6th, 2009 04:20 am (UTC)
wowww... I realllyyyy reallyyyyyyyy liked ittttt
pleasee update soon!!!
i really enjoy reading it..please continue it soon :D
kihae is love♥
where we ends: KiHaedecolorize on April 6th, 2009 08:02 pm (UTC)
Lol There'll definitely be more KiHae to come. It invaded my brain & refused to leave anytime soon. |D

Thanks for reading~
b r i ♥ *: kihae!super showloveslipped on April 6th, 2009 05:24 am (UTC)
omg i love this. too cute. you should totally continue :D

Edited at 2009-04-06 05:24 am (UTC)
where we ends: Donghaedecolorize on April 6th, 2009 08:04 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading~ Anything with Donghae in it is cute to me lol /biased
leona_green: Super Junior//DongHaeleona_green on April 6th, 2009 02:58 pm (UTC)
this is really interesting ^^
i'm waiting for the next ^^
where we ends: Donghaedecolorize on April 6th, 2009 08:05 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading~

P.S.: I love your icon. He looks so cute in there <33333
shaniskara: kihaeshaniskara on April 8th, 2009 10:24 am (UTC)
sorry for commented just now O_O
so,, CONTINUE PLEASE *puppy eyes*
where we ends: Kibumdecolorize on April 8th, 2009 08:02 pm (UTC)
Ahaha better late than never. Thanks for reading & commenting. :D Hopefully I'll have chapter 2 out soon. Gotta spread more KiHae love around to make up for all the missing!Kibum lately, dangit. ;___;